Killer Six Snippet

I'm not sure if I want to post what I have, but if you are interested, I've been writing and rewriting. I never truly stopped. Here's chapter five for a look at where it's sort of at now. I'm open to criticism.

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"Anyone existing in this planet eagers to do something distinction"
- a robot

Last edited by TaboriHK on Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:50 pm; edited 1 time in total

that was a good article. a inspiring and lots of lesson to learn.

i'm wondering how can you create such a good story like that.

you have a future in writing my friend.

i love your article.

i hope i can read more about your work.

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